This summer I went to Istanbul. I enjoyed a lot, I saw The Blue Mosque and Saint Sofia. It is incredible. I liked all mosques in Istanbul, but the Blue Moske is my favorite. I went to Princes Islands and to the Black Sea. The journey to Princes Islands was horrible. We jumped from the boat to the sea to have a bath while the boat was stopped but when I was in water the boat started moving. Fortunately, I got to the boat but many people had to be rescued.
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Very good Arthur! Very interesting!
Let me highlight a few details to make it perfect:
* You said "(...)but I prefer The Blue Mosque". I think it's easier and clearer this way: "(...)but The Blue Mosque was my favorite".
* "(...)the boat started moving" --> "(...)the boat started to move"
* "Fortunatly" --> "Fortunately"
Great job Arthur. Continue like this!
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